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IELTS Writing: Topic Consumerism

Nowadays, many people buy things excessively. Do the advanatges outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, consumerism has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although this trend is not without disadvantages, the upsides will justify these. 

On the one hand, consumerism which has seen as a unstoppable rise offers a number of benefits. First, since mass production is significantly growing from this trend, job opportunities are provided  for everyone more than ever. In fact, professions, such as office work or manual work, from factories and companies are available, helping people, especially the poor, access to employment to increase their income. Second, by going shopping at a frequent level, people can increase their living standards. This means that those with regular income, whether average or high, have a desire to make their families fully equipped or to help them satisfy their shopping needs, leading to higher levels of happiness.

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Topic 2

In some countries, shopping online is replacing shopping at store. Discuss both the pros and cons of this trend.

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In many countries, online shopping has gained in popularity and outweighed brick-and-mortar stores, and this trend has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although this development is not without disadvantages, the upsides will justify these. 

There are a number of drawback of online shopping. First, since online customers cannot touch and feel the product physically before making buying decisions, they are able to gain bad experiences of shopping. In fact, many online stores are likely to deliver fake or low-quality = inferior items for the purpose of increasing profits in a deceptive way, leading to customers’ frustration as a result . Second, by placing orders and completing online transactions, shoppers will be able to run the risk of being victimised by computer crimes, such as ID theft. This means that e-commerce has been a breeding ground for hi-tech crimes, like hackers, which makes their personal information invaded. 

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